Friday, May 16, 2008


These flowers are for my critique partners, Georgiana Daniels and Kaye Dacus.

I implemented their comments on the first three chapters of my latest manuscript. Some notable things jumped out. I have two new favorite words for this story: LIKE and SWIRLED. I got so happy coming up with fun similies, I overloaded the book with them. And everything is swirling, heads, hearts, heat in the cheeks, ideas, feelings...I'm getting dizzy.

As a reward for their stellar work, what do I do? I dump a zillion more pages for critique.

They're the best crit partners ever.


  1. Aww, you're so sweet =) Yay for DCCPs!!!

  2. Beautiful flowers and very special crit partners. :) What encouragement!